End game blood mage build help please

To include, here is the guide I tried to follow online, the rathpith and vertex one

https://mobalytics.gg/poe-2/profile/9ec39c0b-21b7-4676-9b8c-24dffd39e166/builds/018cde13-c521-48dc-99fd-598b7e4e0fcf?ws-ngf5-f7d82102-7e77-4a44-ad24-33b67e8ae7bf=activeVariantId%2C5c59db8c-bb55-473d-bc7d-a2fcd665c8c9

Idk enough about the BM version of that build, but something obvious I saw was this. Get your Qimah and Khari Crossing buffs, it's free, take it.

https://preview.redd.it/0krx67m6mqog1.png?width=1080&format=png&auto=webp&s=0d422114be2b2612e25e4c903a36eb8c40e8e378

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• DPS - Damage per Second

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honestly, im looking at your build for the past 10 minutes and i see nothing wrong(except missing campiagn bonuses), it should be shredding through any content without dying...im seriously confused

what is your playstyle?fuck it we roll or let me stack leeches until its safe to keep spamming my spells

btw:i thing dialla desire can be easily be replaced by concentrated area support, i tried it and reached 1mil dps

Your points in the top right (turn the clock forward and back) are a waste compared to say endless blizzard. Plus levels just trumps everything. Also your gloves suck and you’re always at full mana running mana remnants.

You’re also better off getting a vertex with +4 skills. They’re cheap if you get one without crit (~80div last I saw). People massively overvalue crit%. Also, unless you’re farming Xesht or some other boss your belt sucks. In temple a Headhunter is like +100% to all resists, plus tons of cast and move speed and like quadruples your damage (not an exaggeration).

Overall your build and gearing are good though.

Change gloves to rare gloves with increased socketed effect and get a headhunter

If you’re struggling defensively, arctic armor is great, but, in super juiced abyss maps you can get thanos snapped even with 20 mirrors worth of gear and good defense.