Things about hooks nobody actually tells you (but should)
Stop writing for a crowd... You're talking to one person
"Hey, guys," kills the connection instantly. The person watching is alone on their phone. write like you're texting one specific human. "you" not "you guys". singular always.
open with tension, not context
Most creators spend the first 5 seconds explaining what the video is about. Nobody cares. drop them into a problem mid-sentence—tension first, context never or later.
But here's what people miss about tension
Everyone talks about hooking people in the first second. Fewer people talk about how you end. If you release all the tension by the middle of the video, people leave before the end. keep something unresolved. a question a reveal, a "and here's why that matters" that you hold until the last 10 seconds.
Tension doesn't mean stress
Constant high tension is exhausting, and people tap out. The best creators keep a light background tension, something visually happening, cutting fruit, a satisfying loop, hands doing something, while they talk. Your in-stays are engaged without feeling overwhelmed.
Also, a little bonus because why not:)
vary "I" and "You" throughout. not just "you should do this", also "I made this mistake", "I tested this". Users love it when they can relate or when they feel targeted.