Feedback please

Just did my first video. Can you give me feedback please?

https://vm.tiktok.com/ZNdJEdtLY/

Comments

-I_i_I•over 1 year ago•1

I would recommend cutting 1 minute 40 seconds, personally

https://v.redd.it/nvhrsdw9poog1

this is accurate asf

I have no idea where to crash out about this, so here you go.