New Tiktok vid from me, anything i can improve on?

Have you seen the vids of those scalpers buying out all of the Pokémon card sets? Well they made me wanna collect Pokémon cards all for myself so i bought some (since May of this year!). Made this vid, thinking about making more vids, anything i can improve on?

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okwolf6705about 1 year agoOP1

And yes, this vid is kinda crappy considering the fact i’m pulling and the cards go out of place and shit revealing some names of the cards, so maybe hold them in a different way. I’m planning to make more vids revolving around pulling pokémon cards yes!

BesserCrinabout 1 year ago1

I think it's a fine video, mayne could use a bit more energy. Maybe, if you see one you really like, you can like show off the design or the cards' overall rarity. However, im not one for card reveals, however you did a good job keeping my attention. Definitely try and keep the boxes in frame, and less camera shake if possible while opening the boxes.

Keep it up! The only way you can get better is to keep doing it.

RazzmatazzEven1708about 1 year ago1

Invest in a tripod or something to stabilize your camera a bit more. That’s my only criticism

FullyUndugabout 1 year ago1

Video itself is ok. I think the down tempo music is a mistake, it's too comfortable. Boring, if you will. Need something upbeat. And you need to TALK your way though it. It's about getting attention and keeping it for 1 minutes, essentially. Say weird shit, do weird shit, whatever snaps the ears to you, listen to music that catches the ears. Just think about what grabs attention.

doubleJepperdyabout 1 year ago1

looks like you chose to focus on pokemon the music was nice tho

believesinconspiracyabout 1 year ago1

Add a voiceover, “ooh it’s a blah-blah” “ahh another blah blah” etc etc